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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I normally don\'t go reading poems here but for some reason I felt I wanted to read this. I am glad I did. This is a beautiful piece of work. Spaces perfectly! Not too lomng nor too short. I can also see in my head a story as well. This poem convieves more then most fanfics here could wish.
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked the image of the mermaid, really underscores her lonliness as a \'creature apart\' in the world. Very nice!