rate_review Reviews

I would not mind seeing a Storm version of this one...even with Wind in it....I got nice and toasty just reading it....

now I do hope to read more of your.....Flaming poetry.....

*smirks*

My love alway,

Storm

Wow, no matter how many times I read it, or reread it, it is still extremely erotic, still wonderful...

Still HOT!

Love you!

Wow! I really, really like this! Beautiful use of metaphor. I actually had tears standing in my eyes as I read this; it touched me on some deep level. Dark, primal, consuming, passionate - lovely work.

...*blush* I can\'t believe it......you made a poem out of it.....*face turns beet red*

you did it, you turned the first time into ....a rather....erotic poem....DAMN!


I need to cool off a bit....it\'s too much getting that must detail into my mind....more vivid than my memories......and it\'s from your point of view.........WOW

All I can say is,
Still Love,
Wind

*fanning self* Wooooooooooooooooo

Descriptive, sexy, hot...

Flaming. Windy.

Not at all tame.

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!