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for The Ameni Chronicles

by tehuti88

person AFicR
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The waiting!! OH, THE WAITING!! The major development is sort of slow at times, but surprisingly it’s just... right! It doesn’t bore, whatsoever, it just... calls for MORE development; slow or not the eagerness to read a new chapter and find out what happens next is still the same. *gasps and shakes head disbelievingly*

SO... go at it!! ^-^
person AFicR
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... If I had something to say about it I would, but... erm... the only comment I CAN possibly mention is that the story should be updated more often... I UNDERSTAND that it can’t be done daily. *grumbles, pouts* However its what I think. The story is just that mesmerizing... and instead of bringing out a suggestion streak ( at least in my case! ^^ ) it snares the reader, hopelessly glued to the update page waiting for the new follow-up. So, that’s the main reason why I keep emphasizing to just UPDATE.

No worrys, if something comes to the fore that begs to be highlighted... I’ll do it. In the meantime... UPDAAAAATE!!! :)

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person Melrick
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really don\'t have anything new to say, other than to offer you encouragement, to tell you I\'m enjoying it and hope you keep it up!
person white
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not one for a guy on guy thing, but this was written well. that is what i liked about it.....and the feeling you put.
person AFicR
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEP IT UP!! *hollers*

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person AFicR
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Eeeeewwwww... But... what descriptive talent! Even when at times the violence is just... erm... gruesome (-_-), it somehow manages to... fit the plot nicely. *shakes head disbelievingly* The writing immerses the reader in the story and smoothly brings forth the characters emotional turmoil. It’s uncanny...

KEEP UPDATING!!

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person AFicR
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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No boredom yet!!

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... what happens next? *eyes eagerly glued to the Updates page*
person AFicR
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink*
*blink, blink, blink*

O.O

Erm... continue!?, please?...
person Melrick
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another very fine, descriptive, well written chapter. Well done!
person AFicR
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeek! A cliffie!!... *shrieks some more*

WHAT happens next??... ~_~

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