rate_review Reviews

wow what an incredible story. I dont know what i should say... maybe just keep going and please update soon!! I am looking forward to it!!

I had to read this one twice to be sure that I had understood it all...this one made me think a bit. Ameni and D'juta...I saw some signs of it, but didn't really think much of it. And them bam! I liked that. Now, this incident in D'Juta's past...it's making me think about the orgins of everyone's favorite problematic moru a bit more closely...

On checking the fic status, just in case, what do you know!?...

An update!! *squeals with glee*

More...more...more... *cackles greedidly*

Weeeeeeeeeell!?... *waiting*

*stomps foot brimming with utmost impatience, minutes tick by*

TICK TACK TICK TACK TICK TA-

*...*

*sighs heavily*

Oh well... It was worth a try. *mumbles, mumbles*

Update soon!! ^-^

Well well, the latest chapter, and more thought provoking than the last...hm. There certainly are a lot of background plots...what ever is this moru-kana's connection to D'juta? This is a question I hope to see answered soon, although all of the guessing is keeping my mind racing...hm...

Hmmm... a mistery brewing.

My personal opinion? I don’t like the way Ameni and Nehekhi seem to be drifting apart. Where’s ALL that Passion of the first chapters? It’s as if Thi’usa is closer to Ameni by now, and as I see it... they aren’t as close as that. *frowns...*

As always the story is riveting, the plot doesn’t languish, but like I said... there’s some... detachment from the original relationships formed. I’m not fond of Ameni’s aloofness in regard to Nehekhi; amidst all the casual HOT encounters theirs was fanned by something akin to love, a refreshing emotion somewhat ignored by the apsiu. So I can only hope that it won’t fade.

Udate soon!!

^o^

Erm... sorry?...

After so long a wait for the archive to wright itsef, I'm still... out of sorts on checking it for updates. Only now I'm starting to get in line with ALL the fics I've been following! XP

Anyway...

KEEP AT IT!!

And as for the review...

(copy/paste my last review here)

*snickers*

I enjoyed that. That was a good chapter, keep it up.

Eeeeep! What...what happens next?!

...what...what...what?!!...

Nooooo... a ‘cliffie’!! *shrieks in horror*

What happens neeeeext??!!!!! *whails*

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More excellent and well written stuff. I'm enjoying your work.

I just loooove this story! Please update soon the second chapter! I an itching to know how Ameni is doing.