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for Jade Virgin

by diamondvirgin

person Tawni
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this story and can\'t wait for more chapters! I hope you continue updating soon!
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really nice! Exellent writing. I think you mastered the Korean background very well.
person Jade (again)
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s only been a few days since my last review, but I\'m already anixious to read the next chapter!!! You must update soon or else I\'m goonnnaa like DIE!!! NOOO!!!
person Jade
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anon: You sux!! You\'re just jealous that you can\'t write such beautiful story...
Okay, back to the review...I absolutely adore this story. I mean the story line is just...awsome...Also, I like royalty stories...I don\'t know why, but I can\'t wait until the last chapter!~.~ You better update soon...plz...long or short...I wanna read more!!!
P.S.: You should really be an author...literally.
person wan yu aka meia
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know what\'s wrong with anon *points upwards* But I just suppose the person\'s incapable of appreciating originality. I\'ve read my share of fictions by amateur writers and sure, even though I\'ve come across scenarios involving royalty and tier systems in Korea, your story is definitely one of the better ones I\'ve read *shrugs*. I have to say that you have succeeded in stepping out of the box and avoiding the cliched boy-girl relationships that do not seem to have any REAL problems thrown in their ways. I hope that you will continue writing this story (because I\'m actually quite desperate to know how you\'ll end this story) and keep up the good work.

Longer or shorter chapters, it really does not matter to me as a reader. As long as you offer your readers with an \'outcome\' that you are truly satisfied with... then I\'ll know that you have done the best you could. I would rather read a chapter you\'re proud of than a chapter that was posted along with a note such as: \"I feel that something\'s missing\" or \"it just doesn\'t flow\".
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such dissapointing crap. Please do not write anymore of this shit.
person Emiko
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally, a new chapter! Ah, Jaewon, stop thinking about your damn game and start softening already! Or will it be Junseh who breaks first...? Must have more!
person silver_bow
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay! You updated! Hopefully, the next one will be sooner. This is the first time I\'m reviewing, but I actually am following your story... It\'s really good, well written. Even the plot is intricate, and there are villains. Damn, what more can you ask for? Seriously, I can\'t wait for the moment that Jaewon will start falling for Junseh... and... well, whatever you have in store. KUDOS to you!
person hola
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you updated!!! yes!! i love this story so much and i love following it! i think faster updates are good but id rather have quality than speed. so please do it as fast as you can but still have that flow all your chapters have! o yes and can you email me when you update? thank you!
person l\'etje
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is very very good story, i have read the hole story. this story is very very good and i love the caracters.
keep going and let him fall in love wit her.
keep going and post soon
bye bye