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IT is so GOOD! you really know how to get one into it. I really like the plot its getting very interesting thinking how long can they both hold being alone with each other before they go crazy. The fact that he is actually falling for her slowly its cute and her well having no one else to talk to ecept for him and she being so innocence she loves him already lol... PLZ update soon and GOOD JOB!

i am happy to see that you are writing again. i don't even remember were i left off in your story, so i just reread it all. lol please update soon.

I just found this story the other day and I'm totally sad you haven't updated it!

So when do you plan on updating? It has been a real long time and i have to know what happens in this story.

Hmm the first review of the new year. How wonderful. Please update. No matter how little updating really matters here.

I love this story and I was wondering if you were planning on continuing it......

please please please please please update!!!! must i suffer without reading your story!? have mercy oh mighty writer of fanfics i beg of ye...please...

I am so loving your story. Its not all fast-paced wam-bam-thankyou-ma'm. Your story draws me in so of course I'm going to tell my friends to read it. Update soon please. sorry if this much of a review but at least my opinion was sincere.

Amazing. Absolutely Amazing. Can't wait until the next chapter. Your writing is detailed and it appears as if you've spent time on it. I commend you.

Wow, this is a great story. I love your style and the characters are so complex and interesting. I love that, while the premise of the story is more or less fantasy, there is a lot of realism in the story. Instead of gushing about princesses and princes and enjoying the fairy tale, Junseh's mother warns her about the traps in the palace, etc. You keep Jaewon true to form and don't try to change him into the noble Prince Charming. You're doing a great job of mingling dialogue with the character's thoughts, and the story's progressing at an even pace.

I thought this might be based on the Korean manhwa Goong at first, albeit a more mature, complex version. In any case, I'm really enjoying this story, and while I like quick updates like anyone else, I definitely think you should take your time and write out the chapters as you envision them. Don't rush yourself. I'm sure everyone, even if they may grumble, will appreciate the end result. I don't think you should meddle with the integrity of your writing to turn out faster updates because in the end the story has to flow, it's not just a series of chapters. I also noticed a little bit of difference with the last, hurried chapters. They're a little abrupt, there's a little less substance, and I can see where you might have wanted to explain further but stopped. Anyway, just my two cents. Keep on writin', this is great stuff! ^-^