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for Jade Virgin

by diamondvirgin

person Linda
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m liking this alot. Their relationship is slowly building, and their obvious attraction is fun to read. Good writing!
person S
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know there is someone posting the same story under Virgin Rose or somthing under pen name triz-castro - or at least it sounds almost the exact same
person Fiery Maiden
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG great fic! I am really loving the story. i dunno but I sense some oncoming self discovery and change in this fic. It seems each character has a lesson to learn but also a lesson to teach the reader. I support in this fic Junseh she seems like a typical american with a good nose for politcs and how to change the world in a positive way. Juntao (I hope I spelled it right) he seems more like a dictator and a control freak. God imangine when they do have sex on there wedding night if they stay like there are feeling only desire. The only good sex they will have will be angry sex. Oh well enough of my talking great fic and please update soon i seriously am in suspense
person keyonnamc
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I like how they both get under each others skin...they fit each other so perfectly and don\'t know it yet. Junseh is a good actress, and they seem to be pulling it off. Songwoo might have a codependant relationship with his wife, but Junseh can \'woo\' a person without even knowing. Update soon!!!! Can you e-mail me when you update please:D
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person seashell
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please update soon!
person Jasmine
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you wrote a new ch! I love this fic, it so good!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep writing and updating very fast. Thanks for the great fic.
Until I read your next update Bye.
person dragonc
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi
good story. like it very much.
would prefer if u would update more regularly
it is at cliffhangers that you leave us
it the anticipation is heart wrenching.
person meia
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just went for 6 chapters at one go and *phew*

Great story. Kepp up the good work. And of course, I\'m addicted to it.
person Penny
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a marvelous story! True craftsmanship! Please do continue. Your mastery of the olden tongue is a bit... off, I must say. I say that only because of Jaewon\'s small speech to Songwoo during their telephone conversation. I enjoyed this story immensely and I do hope you continue. In fact, please email me when you continue at the email I entered above. ^_^
person xlj
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is definitely the most original piece i\'ve ever read.
i can\'t wait to read more!
please update soon! :)
you write incredibly beautifully