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for Jade Virgin

by diamondvirgin

person Sara
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooooooooh i LOVE this story!!!!! The play between the characters is really intricate and complicated, well done!!! (update sooooon!)
person woot woot
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story and I think it\'s beautifully delivered, not to mention VERY well written (hence the copyright, I see). You\'ve literally put a whole truckload of mainstream romance writers to shame with this story! Plus the Asian factor is a nice touch too! (then again, I\'m half-Chinese so that might just be my biased praise.)

Personally, I like longer chapters to a story, even it it means a longer update wait period. But of course, the choice is yours. Out of curiousity, have you ever thought about writing professionally? As in publishing your stories into a full-fledged trilogy of some sort? Because I think stories like these could make onto the bookshelves.
person seashell
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You updated, thank you so much. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person keyonnamc
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Amazing update. He is a jackass...I thought she did pretty well, considering the circumstance and on short notice. I feel sorry for her, to be in that sort of relationship with loose cannon like him. I hope things turn out for the best. Cannot wait for more.

person brandi
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. please write more
person Loopypants
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am starting to get confussed but I am still hanging in there. Great story:)
person Tiffany
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww how sad! Well, I am sure Jaewon will fall for her soon.
person Penny
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for informing me of your update! I was very pleased! Man.... the tension just keeps growing. Is the tier system still in effect to this day? It seems so outdated... *shrugs* Please continue! I\'m very interested!
person amanda
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good. i hope you put more up real soon. i hope you make the couple have more romance situations.
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update! This story is so interesting!

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