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for Summer's Night

by WandererInGray

schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It had been awhile since I read the first two chapters of this, so I decided to use that as an excuse to start over at the beginning, and I enjoyed the story as much the second time as I did when I first read it. Your prose has an effortless grace to it, which evokes another time and place, without ever seeming stilted. And your characters are very nicely developed -- they definitely seem like real people to me. I especially like Francois.

Love,
Falcon
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* Thank you much, ma\'am!
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very beautiful story. I love all the sensual details, and the richness of your fantasy world. The elvish sounds very poetic, especially the phrase \"dream in the light, and walk above.\"

I look forward to reading more of this,

Love,
Falcoj