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person Devhan
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...short...but to the point...Hurry up with the next chapter!
person Four Seasons
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is hilarious yet good too.

\"I have to see a pig about a house.\"
LMAO. The 3 little pigs right?
person confused?
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah goldilocks was with the three bears and the wolf/grandmother/woodmans was little red riding hood. just thought id let u no.
person Yamima
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man this is twisted.....

Don\'t think I\'m not enjoying this

update soon
person Jeanster
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for bringing that to my attention. The correction has been made. The only person around to beta it here is only six years old, so I could not very well show this fic to her. Hahahahahaha.
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Humorous and interesting. I\'m eager to read more. One thing...also add more sex please and be a little more descriptive when you do.
person Supreme Ruler
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I guess if a pair of glasses can fool people into thinking Superman is Clark Kent . . .

Five stars. Update soon, please.
person Lily
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gawd! This is fuckin hysterical! I laughed my ass off. More please!