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for The Rape of Innocence

by LustfulAbyss

person Kachie-Chan
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm extremely confused.

If your character is a 'eunuch' than he has been castrated, correct? If he has been castrated, he can't ejaculate. Unless this 'spill' you speak of is piss, than it doesn't make sense or you just didn't do much research...

I mean, I would let it go thinking it was a mistake, but calling someone a eunuch and then having them ejaculate is a PRETTY BIG mistake.

Cause you kinda need testicles to produce or ejaculate sperm... which eunuchs can't and don't have.
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the first of MadLodger's slash recs I've read.

I found it delightfully angsty - and realistic, too. At least in the ways everyone reacted.

We all try to find ways to live with our circumstances - Korin did his best. Now, I guess I have to get to the follow-up story to see if he escaped his past or not.

A terrific read - thank you!
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, yaoi no yume,
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,

I really liked this story, the whole comcept is original and interesting.
Thank you:)
person Ola
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn this is my favorite story here.
person redtatsu
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So completes the cycle. Will there be a one-shot or some kind of sequel where the two meet again? Anyway, loved the story. I\'ll keep my eyes open for your next story.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that is amazing!!! What a great idea!!! ^^ I really liked this, and I can\'t wait for the last chapter -- what will happen to Korin and Michas, I wonder? ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
person Lisn
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um WOW!! Wut an awesome story!! OMG!! I really wasn\'t expecting anything like THAT!! WOW!! I LUV IT!! Now, maybe there will be more Michas?? Hmmm maybe???
person CherryLips
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Korin! I felt so sorry for him! Is this a one shot or will there be more? I hope he doesn\'t have to go to that man! I\'m kind of confused. Is he of a certain race that makes him look feminine, or was all his feminine features from the operation. Please update soon. This could get very good.
person Joelle
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a really beautiful gift for language. I hope you go on and on and on with this story.