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...fuck...

that was good, i wish i could say that i've shared that feeling, but alas, i guess i just don't have any morals. :-)

i know what i'm saying probably doesn't make any sense. it's okay tho. cause i'm on pot.

n e way...cheers

I\'m glad you continued it, just wish it was longer. I loved it anyway! Looking forward to more!

The chapters are too short. Those two you might want to put together and add more. Also you need dialouge! If you had all that stuff this would make a nice story.

wow

What a funny, but idiotic little fic! This should be a lesson, see what happens when you drink too much alcohol. I know of something similar to this that happened to a couple of football players I knew short a while ago. After some denial on both parts they did end up getting in a relationship. I think they now have an apartment together in some other state. Anyway I think it would great if you expanded on this. It could end up turning out to being a pretty good read! Nice work for a short fic!