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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this certainly held my attention. Nice piece of writing here. And on a side note, I wonder why people who hate rape stories (remember, folks, this is FICTION) click on a story to read that is clearly labeled N/C which means non-consensual, and then post a review saying they hate the story? Yes, rape is not sexy. But this is FICTION. It\'s not real.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I am pretty jaded, and some parts of this story still suprised me. Definately some unsavory subject matter. However, I am not here to review the content, I am here to review how it was presented, which was very well. The writing was excellent, and you said what you wanted to say. That\'s all that matters.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hated this story.eeewwww, is all i can say it\'s totally nausiating.there are a few more words to describe it, yucky, tasteless, sexist, unrealistic, unsexy and vulgar. the only people who could enjoy this are either perverts, pedophiles or sexists who feel women should have know control whatsoever over their bodies. i\'m all for sexy stories. but rape is NOT sexy.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i totally agree with worried woman. this story was disgusting. especially since a 12 year old thought it up?!?!?!?!!? thats just nasty!! i mean if like the kids went to bed early then that jason person came home and did her then maybe it would have been alrite but this is just not rite. maybe ur not rite up in ur head.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I read that and I was like, holy crap! Wow...that was horrible. Really...but very well written, I loved it!