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for Babysitting

by VinceVega

person Anonymous
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
utter SHIT!
person Candy Cane
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice bit of creative writing. Will you be updating this fic?

And according to Ayla: \"Please remember to leave feedback for the Authors and if you don\'t have nothin\' nice to say, don\'t say it at all!\"

So please refrain from name-calling. Jeanster did not put down people who hate smut, nor was she being a smartass . She was just making an observation.

And if you don\'t like smut, what are you doing browsing through the Erotica stories anyway?
person coral
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah your right people should not use kids in their sordid stories.
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah i was talking about the author and not the reviewers the reviewers are the only ones that seem normal this story was just sick expecially when two little kids were involved
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEIRD.
person GROSSED OUT
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HOPE ANON WAS TALKING ABOUT THE AUTHOR BEING DEMENTED AND NOT THE REVIEWERS
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well maybe worried woman did not notice n/c. or maybe she figured it wouldn\'t be that horrible she proably regrets reading it. maybe she did not even read all of it before she realized she had made a dreadful mistake. it happens you know. or maybe your just being a smartass. but i can say because it\'s just fiction.
person rage
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jeanster i can understand why you are pissed by people, hating smut. from the stories you do you are proably a slut.
person Foxsan
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good thing I\'m NOT a babysitter ^^. Anyway good story ^^
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
slap slap slap you are a demented person get a life