rate_review Reviews

*crys* why did you stop I love this story please continu it

Beautiful story...truly. I'm surprised to find it here though. I would have paid damn good money to have read this; still will for that matter. If you're already published please drop me a line and let me know what label and pen name you use. If not...Good God, get on it already. Editors will snap this up.

read the whole thing. loved it.

Oh please update the soon... This is such a good story.... so pleasssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am utterly amazed. While I have appriciated your wonderful comments about my story, it very simply fails in comparasion with your masterpiece. It\'s wonderful, and beautiful and sad and epic; I only pray that when I reach your muturity I can write half as well as you can. Whatever you do, never stop writing--you have a wonderful talent for it which everyone would be jelous of, even novelists. I must press that you try to get this published anywhere--it is simply that good. I am a very picky reader and I know I would buy it in a second. Again, I\'d like to thank you for your comments and cannot but hope you will keep writing,
An adoring fan,
Geni

That was really good I loved it.

I hope you write more like it


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Wow. Just wow.

Ok not just wow. Like I would ever leave anything like that.

I have finished reading all six chapters. Five if I don\'t include the prologue, and I am completely blown away. Like I said in my first review, it went like a novel. I genuinely felt for the characters. If I am ever able to perfect my own writing so that I am even half as good as this was written, then I will consider myself lucky. I admire your style, and I crave more of this story. I do hope it is not over, but I suppose all good things must come to an end. I cannot praise this peace of art enough, but I can sure as hell try. No I\'m kidding, I\'ll shut up for now. Thank you!

~C~

Wow. I was amazed at this. Trully amazed. It felt as though I were reading a novel. I certainly intend to continue reading this, but I just had to send my praises first. The characters are life-like. It\'s just the first chapter and still I have grown to feel for them. You paint the scenes beautifully, and I can see this fiction being quite deep, and exciting, but I guess I\'ll never know until I continue reading, aye? Very good.

~C~

Oh, oh, oohhhh, it\'s so, so cute, just so damn cute!

Gah. I want more