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for Joy of a Darkened Heart

by Jessica

person Anon
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm...well. It\'s ok, but you really have no theme, atleast not one that is original in any way. It is the same as a thousand other \"poems\" I have read.
person SueAdams
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to read it twice to fully get it. Maybe I\'m just slow on poems. I really liked it and I hope to see more of your poems out there...or on here. Either way, great job.

-MelissaAdams
person Larka White Wolf
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i thought it was weird but okay in a strange way
person StarAngel Caelum SunSoar
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, you should publish your poems on fanpress.com. They are rather good.
person Kerry U. Furter
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a powerful wish to take revenge...
person Woona
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey dude
Good poem
U make it up?
Great film.
cya later
x Woona x
person Nyere
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I loved it. I love the ideas you place into your pieces. It wasn\'t \"weird\", it was \"creative\"...