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wow it\'s really...ANGST...yeah

O.O Wow, that is scary.

Wierd.

OK. Um, don\'t know what to say... I guess, good job, definatly dark.

I think this is nice! I\'m not one to do free verse. I write in the old sing song fashion throwing a \'doth\' or two in there. Hehe! I like how it followed the eclipse line well. That must have been what was going through everybody\'s mind at that point. How depressing... Bravo! Keep up the good work!

Ah. I like this one alot. Great work.

-M.A.

Good poem. good poem.
My only complaint is probably more of an opinion then anything else on the topic of suicide. I personally think it is one of the most cowerdly things to do. Mabye try for a more positive feel next time, but I must say that not everything can have a happy ending.
Overall nice poem.

Whatever...good poem...
BladesDeath...

Flak: Suicide...an true question...
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Lash: Tee hee hee, death, such a vauge and omonous topic, death smiles upon us all, but all Humanity can do is smile back, hee hee hee...
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Adder: Yess, all though ssuicide may sseem like a way out, all it iss iss another way of running.
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Hawke: Suicide may seem to be the answer, but the truly strong will live though their problems until their results of their strength are realised by others and themselves.
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Sturm: Death matters not. One life is nothing compaired to the problems and persistance of Humanity, but individual lives are important too. Do not ever think that you are alone in the world, for their is always someon behind you, even if YOU don\'t notice it.
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(Intersting story...a sign perhaps?)

oh well good poem