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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I enjoyed it. It\'s a little dark, but we like that here. Keep up the good work!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thatwas really good.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice poem, I loves vampire
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the poem, it was very deep. I hope to hear more from you. :D
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, like it! Very nice, the ending was great. While a couple of the words (\'parasite\' comes to mind) are a bit modern while I see vampires as somewhat archaic. Still. . .very good.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An interesting poem. Vampires have always held a special fascination for me. Makes me glad my friend is letting me borrow the \'Vampire Chronicles\'. I like how the poem seems to proclaim the vampire as superior to all. My favorite line would have to be \"For I crave the day that darkness will stay.\"