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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thought I\'d add some more. Maybe a few windows to open. Like Kyle and Ryan living together? Ryan\'s dad kicks Ryan out cause him and Kyle have fallen in love. And Kyle being the great guy he is takes him in. And when did Remy know french. I\'ll have to ask.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! they going to kyles house! uuu are they gonna get freaky?? lol woot! lol *sneaks up to the window and watches in hopes of kyle and ryan gettin freaky* XD
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! The tiny tidbits of info about Ryan are well hidden and subtle. The character is slowly taking shape. I like that.
Now we have Kyle, the still blank page. Comes from the midle-of-nowhere, likes sport and lives with his father...again, bits and pieces *g*
Keep writing!
Now we have Kyle, the still blank page. Comes from the midle-of-nowhere, likes sport and lives with his father...again, bits and pieces *g*
Keep writing!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say one thing...THANK YOU!! I love everything about this story. You have skills my dear and you use it well. So once again thank you for making this wonderfull story and I cant wait to read more in the future.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfiction...so..much...
Please update soon...XD XD
your\'e a good author ^_______^
by the way, whenever i think of Ryan,
I see him as an attractive goth kid. weird, eh?
Please update soon...XD XD
your\'e a good author ^_______^
by the way, whenever i think of Ryan,
I see him as an attractive goth kid. weird, eh?
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great writing! I can\'t wait to read more about these two, hopefully romance will bloom soon.
I like that you\'re not placing so much an emphasis on the narrator\'s looks, it would be awkward if he were to just start describing his physical appearance. Your story has a nice natural and easygoing pace.
I like that you\'re not placing so much an emphasis on the narrator\'s looks, it would be awkward if he were to just start describing his physical appearance. Your story has a nice natural and easygoing pace.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I will be following this story!! =D continue!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww what a cute fic.
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! Finally! A good story, with proper grammar, a character with feelings, setting, parts of a freaking story! I\'m so freakin\' stoked to find this, you don\'t know. It was a bit frightening, though; I could have sworn I was reading the tale of my own highschool career. (Mine lacked the pretty new kid, but that\'s half the reason I liked this story.) Your way with words is extremely clever, also. It was a pleasure to read this, and I quite enjoy the perspective. Looking forward to the update!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait till the next chapter!! :)