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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw. That\'s kinda sad. Please update soon!!!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really good! I just finished the third chapter and I must say that I like it! Not particularly fond of his dad ^_~ but I can\'t wait to see more of this story! Keep up the good work!
**Zeph**
**Zeph**
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww they kissed! :D so cute. update soon!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the parrot! lol. Oh, I like the story as well, but the dad needs to be smacked....preferably by the mom.
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to write and say that this story has hooked me as a reader already. It\'s sweet, funny, and I love the pace you are moving at - nothing too fast. I like actually feeling like I know and care about characters before reading about sexual exploits. (And yes, I know not everyone feel that way.)
Anyway, have you ever read anything written by Rob Thomas (NOT the Matchbox 20 guy)? He is an author (and also the creator, writer and producer of tv\'s \"Veronica Mars\") whose writing style is very similar to yours - biting and endearing at the same time.
Anyway, I can\'t wait to read more.
Anyway, have you ever read anything written by Rob Thomas (NOT the Matchbox 20 guy)? He is an author (and also the creator, writer and producer of tv\'s \"Veronica Mars\") whose writing style is very similar to yours - biting and endearing at the same time.
Anyway, I can\'t wait to read more.
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Keep writing! ;)
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. I\'ve read alot of different slash fics for along time now, but few have really interested me like this one. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, it makes me realy sad about his dad, especially about how he acts about his brother. = (
I would hate not being able to spend time with my brother just because I\'m gay.
Anyways, this just gets better and better! I can\'t WAIT until your next chapter!!!
-spk
I would hate not being able to spend time with my brother just because I\'m gay.
Anyways, this just gets better and better! I can\'t WAIT until your next chapter!!!
-spk
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I was totally waiting for an update for...ever. *-* Awesome Chapter, so Fluffy!! Kyle\'s so cute~~! Aww n_n I want him as my brother XD; Ugh, Ryans dad is so mean ;-;. I love that bird! XD Best Parrot ever. Aww, I hope things get sorted out with his dad ;_; Or that Kyle does \"something\" to make Ryan forget >D! XD!
Can\'t wait for the next update!
Can\'t wait for the next update!
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SUPER! Update soon....and I dun know....it was actually good. Like most originals.