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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I thought you left this story. Chapter 5 was very good. Chapter 4 unfortunatly... well it felt like a Disney movie, especially with the dream part. Just didn\'t feel very realistic at all... See, with the other 4 episodes it was very easy for me to imagine everything, but it wasn\'t like that with chapter 4.
Anyway, keep writing. Your\'e a great writer!
Anyway, keep writing. Your\'e a great writer!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I thought you left this story. Chapter 5 was very good. Chapter 4 unfortunatly... well it felt like a Disney movie, especially with the dream part. Just didn\'t feel very realistic at all... See, with the other 4 episodes it was very easy for me to imagine everything, but it wasn\'t like that with chapter 4.
Anyway, keep writing. Your\'e a great writer!
Anyway, keep writing. Your\'e a great writer!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, i just reread some of the parts, and Greg sooo totally has a crush on Ryan!!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*reaches for the Kleenex* Sad. So sad. But so bloody wonderful at the same time! It\'s so real. It\'s something that can and probably has happened before. Excellent story. I can\'t wait to read more, so keep up the great work!
**Zeph**
**Zeph**
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! that little punk! tch ryan dont need him! tch! >.> cant wait until the next update
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really very good and interesting. I can\'t wait for the next chapter, keep up the very good work.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It\'s quirky and adorable with just the right amount of angst. I really don\'t like Kyle anymore but I can see why he\'s being a jerk. I think that Ryan should hook up with a cousin of Kyle\'s or something. Hook him up with anyone to make that stupid bastard realize his mistake! Good job. Keep updating.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Makes this simple... I love this story...
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you....must...update....i need to know what happens to poor Ryan....*sniffles*
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw ;_; poor ryan....
Update soon pls.
Update soon pls.