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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story.. can\'t wait to read more please !!!!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this story completer or r u still trhin to finish it? Its really good. e mail me when next chaper. thanx
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyle is such a jerk! What\'s wrong with him!! I love the story anyway. UPDATE SOON!
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope you get a chance to update soon.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good. that argument was . . . just. . . .great! poor Ryan though, the poor kid just cant get a break. And Kyle gets brownie points for trying.
I dont know if i said this before but you have amazing writing skills, and a great grasp on you characters.
peaches
I dont know if i said this before but you have amazing writing skills, and a great grasp on you characters.
peaches
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When will there be more?
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun!! i wonder whats going to happen next!! update soon!!!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a truly depressing chapter. Ryan\'s stronger than I am. I would have run and hide somewhere by now. I can\'t believe Kyle doesn\'t get how simple it is to truly show he\'s sorry for being...average. Bah!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay an update!!! Can\'t wait for the next one!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Decent enough \'tension builder\' chapter. I like how you describe their argument - it sounds EXACTLY like a real life argument. I love it.
Now here\'s a quick guess-the-word for you: U_D_TE
a P and an A go somewhere in that word :)
Heh, just messin\'. Update soon.
Now here\'s a quick guess-the-word for you: U_D_TE
a P and an A go somewhere in that word :)
Heh, just messin\'. Update soon.