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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it\'s going to be an awesome fic! Kind of normal-life situation, but it\'s written well, and that\'s the beauty of it all! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! : adds fic to list of things she stalks... which includes various asian people, and Bagatelle : ^_^^_^
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
review for \"Boy Next Door\"
\"I actually contemplated going to school just as I was, but I didn’t feel like adding “Who? That smelly bastard over there?” to the list of affectionate nicknames that I already had.\"
AAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA~!!
\"I was the only senior who rode the bus to school. I paused for a moment at the curb to hate my life.\"
H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S, I love this original fic so, far, why not continue it, hm? Maybe even add a bit more imagery to the beginning (Say, telling what the main character looks like)... But yes! Very good.
\"I actually contemplated going to school just as I was, but I didn’t feel like adding “Who? That smelly bastard over there?” to the list of affectionate nicknames that I already had.\"
AAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA~!!
\"I was the only senior who rode the bus to school. I paused for a moment at the curb to hate my life.\"
H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S, I love this original fic so, far, why not continue it, hm? Maybe even add a bit more imagery to the beginning (Say, telling what the main character looks like)... But yes! Very good.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seems really promising..continue, please.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good, I love your writting style, I can\'t wait for the following chapters!
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I hope you update soon.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story.I love it so far!more...plz!!!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute, it is a nice beginning.