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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, black hair yes but I changed a few things for now. Wow, seven reviews eh? Know how to really put a smile on this girls face. You guys rock so I\'ll try to get the next chapter up for you soon.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very dark subject matter, but the writting is much more mature and less forced then most of the stories in this category that actually have a plot.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice visuals to set the mood for your fic. I could almost see myself in the bar you\'ve spoke of in the first chapter. I\'ll be sure to make sure to keep a close eye out for any additions to this story. Keep writing
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, I think you should continue it. So far it\'s very promising