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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! can\'t wait to read more! keep going!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A refreshing change of pace from the usual. Very nice style, beautiful use of words. I\'ll be looking forward to more.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story alot ^^-
I like the fact that you use detail and not kiddie words, but proffesional words too. ( look whos talking about kiddie words XP)
I hope you continue writing this
I like the fact that you use detail and not kiddie words, but proffesional words too. ( look whos talking about kiddie words XP)
I hope you continue writing this
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! Single-handedly one of the best pieces i have ever read! Your sex scenes are superb darling, i wonder if u have practiced them... lol. I love the idea of Vishnu loving Adisa for a thousand years, it satisfies my romantic side. And then the blackmail and all of the heavenly rules and whatnot, its poetry, my dear. And satisfies my other side. ~wink~ lol. I hope u write more! I will tell that muse of yours to start showing up more often! lol. But until then, i eagerly wait for more of your divine prose!
Always yours,
Lady Fluffy
Always yours,
Lady Fluffy
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is... cute? well the romance part of it is. So fucking hot in here, is it not? Keep writing. I\'m curious of what will happen next.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so good! It was really passionate and tender. The ending where he gives her a feather from his wings, was so touching. Great job!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man....I loved this! Please write more! It was so beautiful. It\'s one of the best I\'ve read, I think.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man i love thatstory! no \"the end\"! more! that is soooo sweet and sad!