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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is it that you wrote the dark brothers scenes way hotter than the angelic one?You spent more time explaining emotional and physical responces with the dark one.I feel sorry for him,kids do not rape without having been raped.I hope they all end up healing together and escape,you said there where other places...maybe the brothers could become one though I think a triad would be much more fun.She is a pro even if he makes her respond in all sorts of ways it can\'t hurt her heart,it is just physical,pros know how frail humans are.They are forgiving people for the most part.A big money making escort would not be abused badly,there goes the money!(she would not work the street either). I am nit picking,obviously I think you have talent I am just scared this is gonna get to sad for me to finish.I really like the Bros however and feel so bad for the girl.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love reading this story. the fact that her body has succumbed to erebus and her soul cries out for vishnu is really interesting. and the fact that both of them can play her body like a harp (and we can read about it! *shimmies*) is mind boggling, because they can do it for different reasons! vishnu because of love, and erebus for pure lust. heehee, lovely! just lovely! can\'t wait for the next one! i\'ll be looking for it sometime next week!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m rooting for Erebus. Sexy, evil villians all the way! Sorry, I have a fetish for guys with long black hair. I really liked both chapters. Brilliant writing once again. Until the next chapter...
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RDR - Were you reading my mind? ^_^ Thank you for your input!
I\'m working on Ch. 6 now. I should have it up shortly. (Just need to reread it a hundred more times to check for grammer and spelling and such. ^_^) Thank you all, very much, for reviewing. You all are excellent motivation for continuing to write.
I\'m working on Ch. 6 now. I should have it up shortly. (Just need to reread it a hundred more times to check for grammer and spelling and such. ^_^) Thank you all, very much, for reviewing. You all are excellent motivation for continuing to write.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story really rocks. It is sexy and I can\'t wait for our good angel to come back into the picture. Please continue this fic I lover it.
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very happy right now! Those last two chapters were nothing short of amazing. This is one of the best stories that I have ever read and I\'m not just saying that either. Each chapter just gets better and better. I\'ll definitely be around for the next one so keep them coming!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that erebus is a twisted bastard huh? but...*winks* still incredibly sexy! still love your story and can\'t wait to read more!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really, REALLY well written. Great job.
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lookin good...keep it up!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey great story can\'t ait for the next chapter