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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! i love how you switched everything around and turned hate into love! it was unexpected, but a very welcome and outstanding plot twist! leave the sluty bitch in the gutter! bye, bye, ada-whata!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kudos to Adisa for being creative! I hope in the next chapter she can receive a lot more attention.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg. You kick ass. Please update soon, you rock!!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it Please e-mail me when u update
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! this is the best story I have ever read in my life. I\'m dead serious I love the plot to it, other than the both brothers being so hot and stuff. But I mean the story line, I haven\'t seen a lot of that before it\'s really original. Oh I have on question how do I put your story on my Recomended Reading? well update soon ttyl
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erebus is lucky, he gets the best of both worlds. Oh well, at least I get to read about him enjoying both Vishnu and Adisa. I definately hope we get to read about what Adisa is up to while Erebus is away ~_^ Good chapters and looking forward to the next.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD I love this story..dont stop for ANYTHING. Continueee pleasee :D you\'re a great writer! I love how you get into an emotional feel to it as well. To me, it doesn\'t make the sex pointless. It lets me know how they\'re feeling, for real. :) LOVE IT! and I love you for writing a great story ;)
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I\'m hooked! I really love the whole body betraying the mind thing. Please please keep updating this story!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just got done reading all chapters and i think its coming out really good. I am looking forward into reading the end of the story which i hope i won\'t have to wait long. I shall say that to me it needs more sex action, thatis to satisfiy my perverted mind that is, though its up to you of what you choose to do. GOOD LUCK ;)
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review, blisbop. Mostly the reason why the darker scenes are more prominent is that I just love writing them. I like that the darkness usually is there because something that was once good was twisted... either by the individual from within or by something external that happened to them. Erebus didn\'t consider his actions against Vishnu to be rape at first. So, no, Erebus wasn\'t raped as a child... just had a very warped sense of love. How it got warped, who knows? Perhaps just that was the way he was made, maybe he has a greater destiny to fulfill that required him to take certain actions. (we\'re getting deep into theology - free-will, etc., I know) Also, from a story standpoint, the darkness makes for good plot twisting and better reading. ^_^
Anyways.... As for Adisa, she, because of her poor childhood, is convinced that she in some way deserves punishment. Punishment for being not good enough, for being alive. So yes, she is a person who has deep emotional wounds, (running away from home at 16, turning to prostitution, attempted suicide, I would say so!). She more than likely subconsciously seeks out the type of man that would be inclined to be rather rough and abusive in the bedroom. Can she be healed? Another good question. ^_^ I understand what you are saying, but there are reasons for the characters actions that aren\'t mentioned in the story. Perhaps I should go back into their past, but this is the erotica/sex category and that\'s where I chose to concentrate the thrust of my story. (pun very much intended) -_^ I hope this sheds some light on things for you and future readers. Probably more than y\'all wanted to know.
Also, I know I haven\'t updated in a very long time. We had to move residences and that was a BAD situation. (I hate moving anyway) And then other life stuff has gotten in the way. I am on the verge of revisiting this story soon. I\'ve reread it recently to get the feel for where I was at and maybe where it\'s going... still not too sure on that until I actually start writing again. I still have no clue about how the story will resolve. Maybe happy, maybe sad... probably bittersweet. ^_^ Those are my favorite endings. We\'ll see. There is still some story to go before we have to worry about that, though. ^_^ Thanks again everyone for reading. See you soon in chapter 7!
Anyways.... As for Adisa, she, because of her poor childhood, is convinced that she in some way deserves punishment. Punishment for being not good enough, for being alive. So yes, she is a person who has deep emotional wounds, (running away from home at 16, turning to prostitution, attempted suicide, I would say so!). She more than likely subconsciously seeks out the type of man that would be inclined to be rather rough and abusive in the bedroom. Can she be healed? Another good question. ^_^ I understand what you are saying, but there are reasons for the characters actions that aren\'t mentioned in the story. Perhaps I should go back into their past, but this is the erotica/sex category and that\'s where I chose to concentrate the thrust of my story. (pun very much intended) -_^ I hope this sheds some light on things for you and future readers. Probably more than y\'all wanted to know.
Also, I know I haven\'t updated in a very long time. We had to move residences and that was a BAD situation. (I hate moving anyway) And then other life stuff has gotten in the way. I am on the verge of revisiting this story soon. I\'ve reread it recently to get the feel for where I was at and maybe where it\'s going... still not too sure on that until I actually start writing again. I still have no clue about how the story will resolve. Maybe happy, maybe sad... probably bittersweet. ^_^ Those are my favorite endings. We\'ll see. There is still some story to go before we have to worry about that, though. ^_^ Thanks again everyone for reading. See you soon in chapter 7!