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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp*
Intense and wonderful. Your imagery and use of words is incredible, it is not too much and is bittersweet and so heartfelt that...
bittersweet beauty is all I can say to describe this.
storyanalogytolifetheraputicreleasealookintolife
I hope you do get the release that you are looking for in writing this story.
Love.*
Fly.
With regards to who Harper gets involved with, when I first started reading this before you took it down and started reposting, I always thought he wound up with Natalia. For the fact that you mention her as being a hopeless romantic, and in need for some pure affection. Whereas I really haven\'t gotten much on Allen\'s character. So as the story is progressing now I would like Natalia and Harper.
Intense and wonderful. Your imagery and use of words is incredible, it is not too much and is bittersweet and so heartfelt that...
bittersweet beauty is all I can say to describe this.
storyanalogytolifetheraputicreleasealookintolife
I hope you do get the release that you are looking for in writing this story.
Love.*
Fly.
With regards to who Harper gets involved with, when I first started reading this before you took it down and started reposting, I always thought he wound up with Natalia. For the fact that you mention her as being a hopeless romantic, and in need for some pure affection. Whereas I really haven\'t gotten much on Allen\'s character. So as the story is progressing now I would like Natalia and Harper.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow you have me already attached to this story and it\'s only the 3rd chapter. I like how you put just enough detail in it. Not enough to make me stop reading because of what Ana\'s dad does to her and her mom. Its enough to make me disgusted with him and want to go there and beat him down. Teak seems like he has had some problems too. Hopefully when they find eachother he can really offer the protection he talks about. But also I don\'t want him to become a control freak... Hopefully they can tackle their demons together. I have enjoyed this story so far and I hope to see it updated often.
Kali
Kali
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far! But I feel so sorry for Ana\'s mother, I really want a happy ending for her.
And a happy ending for Teak and Ana too... but it\'s more sided for the mother... XD Sorry I\'m rambling now. But please keep up the awesome work!
And a happy ending for Teak and Ana too... but it\'s more sided for the mother... XD Sorry I\'m rambling now. But please keep up the awesome work!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this... i saw it at the top of the list and i thought you added another chapter but you didn\'t!! lol I think this story will be very good
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I feel so sorry for Ana\'s mom. I hope you don\'t kill her off or anyting.
And Teak\'s story about how his mother and sister died is a bit creepy, wow, this world their living in is very scary.
Please update soon!
And Teak\'s story about how his mother and sister died is a bit creepy, wow, this world their living in is very scary.
Please update soon!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Creepy images... *Tries not to think about it* But I\'ll read more anyway. I want to see where this is going. PLEASE update soon!!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how he\'ll readct when he sees her... and that last part was funny, when harper put his arm around him... lol. Please update soon!!
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story so far. i like teak\'s pov. please update soon!
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1 & 2
Wow. deep, well-written, please update soon
Wow. deep, well-written, please update soon
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m disappointed that no one has been reviewing this story. Keep up the good work mate! I\'m looking forward to the next chapter.