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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm what a very sad chapter. Her probelms make me feel like in going to explode. How does she deal with it. Her dad is a lunatic. That\'s for sure and it\'s quite sad that he blames their lost love on Ana. *shakes head* None of the less I can\'t wait until the next chapter is up, and when they get to meet. Keep posting it\'s really good!
Kali
Kali
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..Wow.
Fucking awesome.
Fucking awesome.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful yet terrible. im entranced with this story because it has so many harsh realities that ive never had to or been forced to face, it ellicits many tears and makes my heart clench even though i know that i have never been or never will go through this type of agony. im sorry
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. you killed Ana\'s parents off, and I feel happy? I guess because you put a bit of her father\'s point of view I guess. Or maybe it\'s the song I\'m listening to.
But still you\'re a wonderful author and I\'m excited to see what happens to Teak and Ana! And I think I forgot to review about the Harper thing, it\'d be nice if Allen had someone. So I vote with Allen!
But still you\'re a wonderful author and I\'m excited to see what happens to Teak and Ana! And I think I forgot to review about the Harper thing, it\'d be nice if Allen had someone. So I vote with Allen!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i beg of you?
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well if writing is therapy for you then thats great because others benifit from it too. I like your writing, it\'s detailed and intresting. I liked this chapter, we now know that Allen has a \'crush\' Ana. I can\'t wait when Teak and her meet, or what you have in store for their futures.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is outstanding, for someone who had such humble beginings with literacy, you have certainly mastered your use of words. Your work is lyrical, dark, compelling and heartbreaking, with the purest hope peaking in. I forget who said it earlier, but your work is very bittersweet. I hope you continue with this, I can\'t wait to read more.
It does however pain me that you must have suffered to write so powerfully, that a great deal of the depth of your writing comes from personal experience, I hope this is cathartic for you, and that you do manage to find some peace & happiness.
Warmest regards
Blue
It does however pain me that you must have suffered to write so powerfully, that a great deal of the depth of your writing comes from personal experience, I hope this is cathartic for you, and that you do manage to find some peace & happiness.
Warmest regards
Blue
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is wonderful, the way you use imagery is wonderfully terrifying, horribly revolting, yet massively entrancing. You have such a dark and deep perspective on this story. When I read it I feel like I want to just reach in and beat the living hell out of Ana\'s and Teak\'s fathers. If that\'s what you could call them, fathers. I look forward to future updates. I was hooked the first time you posted this, and I\'m hooked once more.
I say Harper and Natalia should be together, in response to your poll.
I say Harper and Natalia should be together, in response to your poll.