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I haven't abandoned nor forgotten this story...I loved the dark psychological roots in this story, and the undeniable fact that Teak and Ana DO care for one another, in spite of it being very messed up...I do hope you finish this story...You inspire me greatly:)

Wow! I really love this story. Angst...I eat it for breakfast, lunch and dinner. I adore the way you don't make their lives peachy keen; there's no such thing as perfection, and the events in this story are so in sync with what I myself have experienced; it's just amazing.

I do hope you update soon.

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I like this story. It's so vivid started by smell, skin feeling and taste to emotions and atmosphere.
Especially the smoothness when your characters reveal their views and throughts while they walk through their chapters.

Simply great! And I like that it is realistic and not sterile like most romances.

I love this story. I hope you update soon and not let the lack of reviews discourage you. I'm sure a lot of people are reading this story, just not reviewing. I used to a lurker myself, but I wanted to give the stories I loved a little love. Please please don't abandon this story!

WOW! I have a bit of an obsession with stories told in first person, because it actually gives such an intimate insight...Now you know what I mean when I say: "this is brillant!" I'm only on the first chapter,but already, I'm hooked!
I espeacially liked this part:

"The liquor flowed like Poseidons oceans, decrepitating the mind. Men who normally claimed homophobia grappled and groped other men, their groins grinding together in a lustful frenzy. Masculine lips crushed together, only knowing the need to dominate; subdue."

Great descriptive writing!

Keep up the good work!
-Cleya Heart

Oh Wow, so so so so so bloody good! Please update again, and soon, you write in such a unique manner, so captivating!

plz continue the story, the angst of it can relate to ppls lives n i reali enjoy readin it. Ur writing is good with all the components in it, unlike some with no description of the scenery. it created an image in the readers mind
the relationship between anna and teak is deep and surreal
plz write more about Angel, i also wish he was a good ending in his beauty
bloodwolf

that\'s really good. i hope to read more.

i love it...please update soon.

I like your writing style. The content of this is creepy... but in the way of a train wreck, I can\'t take my eyes off of it! I\'ve got it book marked to keep track of more updates, and I hope there will be many more to come (and the sooner the better!). You\'re off to a great start and it\'s just gotten to the best part. I\'m so interested to see how the two will interact being together in the flesh for the first time in eleven years (?). With Teak having taken on many of his step fathers traits and Ana thinking this is the way the world actually works I\'m interested to see if the two will figure out what normalcy is or if the cycle continues!