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by ble

person Siarra
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this little fic seemed most promising. It was interestingly written, and there\'s just something special about stories that start with with an evil monster attacking the hero\'s bedroom. Of course that just might be my attempt at having a sense of humour.
The characters were very interesting, and I for one would like to get to know them better. The chemistry going on between them was wonderful and I\'m very sorry for having to say this but I think that after that interesting little conversation and character description, the sex seemed rather...anticlimactic whereas the ending was very funny and somewhat, dare I say it?, sweet.
person Ariana
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it,the end made me giggle