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by Korde

schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, korde... i'm amazed by how universal the human experience can be, sometimes. i have a bit of prose i wrote when i was 16 called Pandora's Box... i can't believe how similar it is in feeling to your (character's) experience. i like the first person... you mentioned you were worried about that, but i find it very difficult to write in first person... it came across really really well.
person Angelica
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the story of my life starting two years ago. i love it.
person Naota
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it...I can really relate to this and that\'s what makes it so...great. Wonderful job.