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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very interesting and a concept that I haven\'t come across before.
I\'d like to see where it goes....hopefully some Cain and Orion action. lol Please update soon.
I\'d like to see where it goes....hopefully some Cain and Orion action. lol Please update soon.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I really like this story, your doing a great job with it :) I really like the way it\'s written, the first chapter was a little confusing at first but I understand it all now. Update soon!! :D
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I can\'t wait for the next update!!
**Zeph**
**Zeph**
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story, it was so captivating. And I really need to know what happens next, please udate soon!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intriguing story. I like the way you\'ve described everything. There are a few spelling errors, but we all have those. I can\'t wait to see what happens in chapter four. Update soon please!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very nice! You must update NOW! I wanna see what happens with these two now! And maybe we can find out tube guy\'s name. LOL ;) Nice work! Keep it up!
**Zeph**
**Zeph**
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style.... it is very descriptive.....definitely staying tuned to see where the story goes from here...... wonder what Cain\'s gonna duen now.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I really like it so far. I can\'t wait to see what happens to Cain and mysterey guy (I don\'t know his name so I made one for him) :) Please write more soon.