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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. That was a very sexy chapter!!! I Loved IT. Damn, I hope I can see more soon, this is just getting to good to stop reading.
Very well done, it was very enticing, truly loved it,
Good job,
Enma
Very well done, it was very enticing, truly loved it,
Good job,
Enma
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I\'ve been able to read the first few chapters and so far I really do like it. Your characterization is awesome. And I like the little world you\'ve built for them. There\'s something about a closed off sort of society that I really like.
Also, I\'m really interested in your idea as far as Orion... The whole tube thing was cool... Interesting teaser to what\'s to come, though I\'m sure that parts already up and will be in following chapters that I\'m currently copying and pasting so that I can read them later. Only a few more to go and I\'ll be done with what you\'ve got so far.
I also like the relationship between Cain and Orion so far... It was sort of an odd transition at first but then I found it was sort of cute in an odd way. But I haven\'t gotten much further than that so it may have changed. I\'m assuming it does, assuming they have sex. XD
Anyway, like I said- great job so far! And I did add you to my reccomended reading... Your story is awesome and I can\'t wait to read more. Damn all the working I have to do. x_x
Also, I\'m really interested in your idea as far as Orion... The whole tube thing was cool... Interesting teaser to what\'s to come, though I\'m sure that parts already up and will be in following chapters that I\'m currently copying and pasting so that I can read them later. Only a few more to go and I\'ll be done with what you\'ve got so far.
I also like the relationship between Cain and Orion so far... It was sort of an odd transition at first but then I found it was sort of cute in an odd way. But I haven\'t gotten much further than that so it may have changed. I\'m assuming it does, assuming they have sex. XD
Anyway, like I said- great job so far! And I did add you to my reccomended reading... Your story is awesome and I can\'t wait to read more. Damn all the working I have to do. x_x
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grin*
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UWAH! stone muffin can\'t wait!! *cling* u kick ass!!!
peaceV
peaceV
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable so far, very interesting.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable so far, very interesting.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a very intersting cahpter!! i hope to see more soon!! i really am starting to love this story more and more.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. I would love to read about Cain\'s looks and it would be amazing if you put the lion into the story. Please update quickly, you\'ve been kind of slow. Not that I\'m complaining but I\'m on the edge of my seat waiting for more. PLEASE. I\'ll love you forever. ;)
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! please update it soon, I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Orion tamed a huge stallion and Cain has a lion. I can\'t wait for you to write more, and explain who the people in the second part of the chapter are. I love this story. :-)