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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dear, there is no such thing as \"too long\" in good fanfic. you just keep writing, we\'ll keep reading.
i got a very logan/rory/\"gilmore girls\" vibe from this chapter. couldn\'t he have said \"uh vince i\'m busy right now...can we get together later?\" and then on with the ear-nibbling!
don\'t take TOO long with that next chap. i\'m sure you\'ll be inspired to write something BRILLANT!
i got a very logan/rory/\"gilmore girls\" vibe from this chapter. couldn\'t he have said \"uh vince i\'m busy right now...can we get together later?\" and then on with the ear-nibbling!
don\'t take TOO long with that next chap. i\'m sure you\'ll be inspired to write something BRILLANT!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! don\'t wait to post the rest of this parental confrontation too long. and we need more UST. or some actual sex, please! whenever it\'s conveinent...
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m always so happy when I look and see that you\'ve updated. Another great chapter!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story pleze contiue
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just thought i should let you know: a part of the chapter (the \'hang the DJ\' shirt scene) was already used in a diff chapie. but other then that it\'s all good!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww I dont wanna have to see Miranda and Finn slpit up for an entire semester =(
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The characters are so well described and they\'re realistic. Finn sounds so cool! Anyway, Vince\'s house in Kent; i live in Kent in England (UK). I almost cheered aloud that my county was in this story. Did i mention i love it?
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter, kinda leaves you hanging, waiting to see the second part, hopefully then the blanks will be filled.
Keep it up
Blue
Keep it up
Blue
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on the nephew. thats awesome! i hope the next chappy is done soon, but i understand if its not. thought id say that this one was awesome. you call that a filler? crap! i cant wait to read what happens next. i cant believe that this is so good. its so hard to find stories that are really good, like this one. i love all the characters, they seem so real! i hope nothing bad happens to fin and miranda, theyre so cute together. i think im in love with fin! now if only i can meet a guy like him, poufy haired and awesome. update soon!!!!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! ^_^ That was an awesome chapter!
Keep it up, can\'t wait to read more!
Keep it up, can\'t wait to read more!