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ooooooooo my god this just keeps getting better and better! i love how his parents are so easy to hate but Molly isn\'t. the make out scene was greate but still not to harlequin. hmm i don\'t think i spelt that write. oh well! keep up the great work, i love it!

Great story! I love that you incorporate a lot of movie quotes and tidbits about music into this particular story. It has made reading it very intersting and fun. Your writing has also made me smile as I read it and sometimes even laugh. I love that in an author. You\'re doing a great job and I can\'t wait for the next installment!

--RC

You must start the next chapter now! And I didn\'t think that chapter was terribly long, in fact, you must make them longer. I insist. Keep up the great writing. Can\'t wait to read what happens next.

Okay, now you\'re just being mean...

I am kidding, of course. This was a great chapter, and I am loving the continuous development of the characters, as well as the growth of their relationship together. M and F are amazingly realistic portrayals, and I give you my utmost respect in their creation. I can\'t wait to read the next installment, whenever you get around to it.

I love love love love this story! I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Well done!

So, now I totally hate Finn\'s parents, which I\'m sure was your intention (good job, by the way ^_^). I always hate parents who stifle their children\'s talents, perhaps because mine always encouraged mine. And I think you just managed to tease your readers as much as Miranda teased Finn in this chapter. Totally not fair, but I suppose I AM reading it for the plot and not the sex... ^_^

Oh, and did you mention something about the chapter being \'terribly\' long? Lol...that\'s funny. You could NEVER make them long enough that we would start complaining, so don\'t apologize! ^_^ I think we\'re probably all thrilled that it was a -what did you call it? A \'need a beverage break in the middle\' chapter? Take a break? From this? No way! I was leaning forward in my chair the whole time, holding my breath (not the whole time ^_^).

Another wonderful chapter! And I will patiently await your next.

Wow!


That was fantastic, deperately awaiting the next chapter! I was so fearful it was going to end and then that scene back at Finn\'s place was so hot!


Keep it up sunshine, you have captivated another very avid follower!

I think that that chapter was wonderful, but then again I love long chapters. Finn and Mirandas\' humor thoughout their \'situations\' amuses me, and makes it very intresting to read. I can\'t wait to see what happens between them, and Finn\'s family. I hope they can accept FInn for who he is. Miranda and Finn make a great match so I hope everything works out for the better. And I know I\'ll just die when Finn goes to London, well if he does that is. Keep up the great work!

How his parents realy suck lol. More action! Woo hoo!! This chapter was definitely hot. Cant wait for the next chapter. I check to see if their up almost everyday!

Typos: Really* they\'re* Sorry about that!