AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Writing Class

by amistillill

person christine
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when I think of Finn, I can\'t help but think of a picture called Fynn (harr dee harr) at this address: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18254079/

and another picture called Muffed Rock at this address: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19767247/

they aren\'t blessed with the Morissey hair - do, I\'m reminded of Finn when I look at them nonetheless. Think of that as a compliment =] I\'ll be waiting for an update soon, Mis/ter lastofthefamous.
person Mayoslady152
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! I love your work, you\'re a very talented writer! *grins* I hope you update soon, your story is one of the few reasons I come on this site. A lot of stories on here just have sex, they don\'t have anything that leads up to it, or that comes after... I like how you have a lot of events in your story and a lot of information about each character. I can\'t wait until you update, keep writing, you\'re very gifted.
person CD
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh how I love this story. Its well written, beautifully portrayed characters and a time line that is neither rushed nor dragging. I love it. Vince is my favorite secondary character...his personality is to die for. Keep it up...!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, I love your story. I also especially loved your incorportaion of the tragic recent events into your plot too. Keep writing, cause I want to see what happens next!!!
person cukid9
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Miranda and Finn maybe moving in with Vincent...that should leave you open for all kinds of things to happen ^_^

I really like how you incorporated the happenings in London in this chapter. It justs adds to the realness (is that a word?) of the piece.

As always, great work and I can\'t wait to read more!
person Kali
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. You know why I like it? Because Finn asked her to move in with Vince and him. YES!!! Finn is being really considerate and I love that. It\'s going to be very sad for when he goes though, I dont know what she is going to do without him for so long. I have had the idea that maybe Miranda can change Finn\'s mind on the marage and children thing. I hope she does, at least. Well I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter!

Kali
person Angel
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Thanks for the update! Wow Miranda living with Vince that should be quite interesting. =)
person Angel
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*peeks head from around the corner* ... update?? =)
person Charlie Jones
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I started reading it 2 hours ago and now am sorry to have to stop. Finn\'s character is great and i love how you stick the movie and lit references it, don\'t even try to stop- i love them. Vincent is absolutely halarious and once again i love Finn. Miranda is awsome too, but Finn just stands out. I also like how you haven\'t discribed their appearences too much, it lets me choose what i want them to look like and adds something to the reading experience. Keep on writing, you are amazing.
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dying for an update!!