rate_review Reviews

This story is amazing. I stumbled on it by complete accident and read all 15 chapters in one night; I found myself unable to turn away. The story is so well written that I forgot I was sat at my computer and almost imagined that I was holding the worn pages of a well-read book in my hands. If this were to ever be a book, I\'m sure I\'d by it no matter how heigh the shelf or steep the price. I await the net chapter eagerly.

Give me more, give me more! Okay. Tha\'s what I want. I need to read more of this stuff! Lovely writing!

I really love this story. I have read countless stories on aff and have never really wanted to review but this story is really great! I can\'t wait for the next chapter

This story is just sososososo awsome!!!!!!!!!!

Another great chapter. I have really fallen for Finn\'s character, as I believe most readers have. He\'s just got that hot mysterious guy thing that I can\'t get enough of. Your writing talents, particularly with dialogue, were showcased wonderfully in this chapter. I can\'t wait to read more.

I love your story and can\'t wait to read more.

I have always loved this story, but the last few chapters have been... uneventful. I\'m not saying anything about your writing style, which puts mine to shame. I\'m simply reccommending that you move SOME action into your story. But you\'re still one of my favorite authors on this site. I can\'t wait until the next chapter.

Love your writing! I started reading this story quite a few months ago and I\'m completely hooked on it. I think I check every other day for an update so thank you for creating such beautiful work. =)

I think one of the things I like most about your writing is that you have such a great talent for dialogue. I\'m a little envious ^_^

Loved the chapter -I was laughing through the whole thing. Will patiently keep an eye out for your next update.

I mostly just lurk and read stories without ever commenting - I know, shame on me! But I wanted to let you know that your story is wonderful. I like that the characters are real, honest, and unique. The way in which your characters interact, something I find to be the most difficult part of writing stories, is truly exceptional. There is plenty of emotion, tension, and humor. And while you are moving their romantic relationship along you also continue to build upon their friendship - not many writers do that, it is usually one sacrificed for the other. Your secondary charaters are multi-dimensional and are strong enough to deserve a lead; again, different then the writers who use them simply as fillers. I appreciate you sharing your story with us! I cannot wait to see where you take the story and us in the upcoming chapters. Thanks again!