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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! That love scene was done wonderuflly! And Damn Finn and his charisma *shakes fist* lol. Poor Miranda FInn\'s rents suck! Can\'t wait for the next update!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter as usual! I love the direction that you are taking the characters - I cannot wait to see what happens when Finn has to leave for England... that should be good (maybe it will help them to realize how important their relationship is). Thanks for sharing and as always I can\'t wait for the next update!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, your story blew me away. There was such humor in the dialogue and intimacy in the character interactions. And the love scene was phenomenal. I do hope you make it as a writer, if that\'s what you wish, because you are one of the most talented authors I have ever come across - published or not.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did you stop before the actual sex scene, now I am all hot and bothered. Hmph. Your going to have to re-right the sex scene, make it more detailed, send it to me if you won\'t post it. I am just kidding, kinda, and waht does finn mean by he doesn\'t want herto be his girlfriend? Men are weird.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm...excelllent....but me in such a mellow mood after he sang her to sleep **sigh**- update soon!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank god you updated! Even if it took you forever, I\'m pretty sure I can forgive you because this chapter was great ^_^ Even if you aren\'t happy with some of it, I think it was probably the best one yet. And, no, not because they finally had sex ^_^ My favorite part, actually, was Finn meeting her parents. Although, I will admit that the tension between the two was killing me ^_^
Can\'t wait to see what happens next. Writer\'s block sucks, but you\'ve created such a wonderful story!
Can\'t wait to see what happens next. Writer\'s block sucks, but you\'ve created such a wonderful story!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just got done reading chapter 16 and I thought it was really good, there was only one thing I missed, the details of their love making. I was just wondering if you did that on purpose?
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I have been reading this story for a while now and I really am enjoying it. I hope you up date sometime soon!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm...excellent story..the suspence is killing me by the way...when are they going to finally sleep together!!!! lol- i have absolutley no suggestions or comments other than you rock!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! I check AFF several times a week to see if there has been a chapter added - yes, I am slightly hooked, only slightly... umm, well... could you update soon? Please? So maybe more then slightly hooked...