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by amistillill

person Rose
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, hope the next chapter comes out soon!
person Tirch
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter - funny and heartwrenching all at once. I can\'t wait to see what happens. You keep your readers on our toes and guessing what\'s going to happen next. Just remember, though, Miranda would have to have a passport with her if she was going to go to London. Looking forward to the final chapter!
person christine
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i read the story over again in case you\'re wondering why i\'m back again.


.. AND THEN THEY LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER IN ENGLAND WITH VINCENT (!!!) that\'s what i hope it\'s gonna be like .. but i\'m also half hoping for miranda to say no .. or something .. i dunno why, i\'m just excited for if that happens, i\'ll be ready. i hope it doesn\'t though. mostly hope it doesn\'t happen .. half hoping.


i would love to live happily ever after with vincent ::worships his leg:: don\'t worry, the leg is still attached to him.
person nish
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh ...wow ... how cute
pls let her make an impulsive decision and go ..i would just die if this story has a sad ending............I dont know what else to say except wow.. this is oneof the best stories ive ever read and ive read a few alright,so i know what im talking about....well in any case ur very goood and pls give this story a good happy ending...
person Mayoslady
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, i love your story. This past chapter was wonderful, I can actually relate to what you write and you make it seem so real. I almost started crying when Miranda and Finn had to say goodbye- it reminded me of how hard it was to say goodbye to my boyfriend when his family was transfered. I can\'t wait until you post the last chapter. You\'re a great writer, I love your work.
person christine
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hostess .. ::laughs uproariously:: At first, when I read about the fucking monkeys, I thought it was another dream. Poor Finn .. I\'ll get a meerkat for him. Ahhh noooo rolling his sooocks, my dad does that, ackkk. Nevermind. He can get his own meerkat.

Last chapter .. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (there better be a sequel to this)
person GirlFixer
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a way to end a chapter! I\'m kinda sad that the next chapter will be the last, but I hope you\'ll continue to write other stories, as I love your style of writing. Well done!
person Angel
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! Thats all i have to say =)

Glad to hear that your friend is all right but Im sorry for his losses. I know how you feel about your friend I\'m still waiting to hear from my Aunt who lives in MS.
person iotc247
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE LAST CHAPTER?!?!?!?!?! ARE YOU MAD?!?!?! There better be a sequel or you better be looking into the Whitness protection agency so that I don\'t get to kill you!!
person cu-kid
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...entertaining as ever...and so full of emotion. I loved it!

So glad that you finally updated. The beginning of the chapter made me smile and laugh, the end made me hold my breath. Great work. I will be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next/last chapter.