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schedule
April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the chemistry between the characters. Update soon!
schedule
April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon....I like it a lot!!!!
schedule
April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure what you\'re trying to accomplish, writing in the present tense. However, I STRONGLY recommend against it, because it sounds like a summary. A summary is NOT a story.
schedule
April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for the love of good, write more!