rate_review Reviews

HURRAY! ^_^ Although it kinda sucks that the chapter stopped when it did, I loved it! You have this amazing ability to show us your characters\' personalities just through their dialogue, without going into long, drawn out explanations about them -which sometimes are nice, but I think the way you do it makes it flow better. I find myself already liking Finn\'s friends. Keep doing what you\'re doing and I\'ll be eagerly -but not patiently! ^_~ - awaiting the next chapter!

I think that you worry too much about inserting stuff about books and movies into the story...I think it makes it more real. I mean, what do people really talk about? I enjoy the references, even if no one else does ^_^ Like, in this chapter, with the reference to the Family Guy episode...I love that part! It made me laugh reading that. So, I think you have another great chapter (I was beginning to worry we were going to have to wait a looong time to see another) and, as always, can\'t wait for more. Oh, and I think I can pretty much speak for everyone when I say, it doesn\'t matter how long you make the chapters. You could post twenty pages worth and we\'d still be craving more!

OHG I love this story so much!!! Its so freakin awesome!!! I wish I knew Finn, he\'s so cute. How awesome that he took Randa to laser tag, i love laser tag!! And I liked hitchhikers guide, i thought it was great. What\'s up with his dad? What a jack a**. update soon!! i love you!!! i love this story!!!!

i\'m sooooo very happy you updated, and i can\'t wait till the next one. I love finn and randa. love them. lots.

Holy macaroni! (terribly sorry ;P) This is one of the best stories I found in a long time. Your writing is awesome and your characters just breathe they\'re so real! Awesome. Please keep writing! ;)

i really like the way the story is going. I hope to see the next chapter soon.

The chapters just keep getting better. I\'m eagerly awaiting your next update!

I love this story, please keep writing...i think it\'s amazing.

-wildfiregirl

this story is excellent. i love how the characters have grown, although i\'m curious to their writing styles, which we don\'t see enough of (esp. finn\'s-- ps, i love that name!) and i can\'t wait to see how thier offical \'relationship\' develops!
thank you!

OH MY GOSH!!!! I absolutely love this series. I have just stumbled over you and your writings and have fallen madly infatuated. I hope that the next chapter of this story comes out soon. I love the character Miranda and especially the character Finn. You make the characters seem so real. You make it seem that we are actually watching these two characters. that is one of the things that I love about your writing. Another thing that I like is the fact that you just seem to pull me into these stories. It is like I am hypnotized and can\'t stop reading even though I know that I have got to go. That would be downside except I would choose reading another chapter of this story then doing something else. You are now one of my favorite writers of all time and I love how you use actual books in your writing because now I really am going to go read some of those stories. I have also read \"The Little Prince\" and loved it. Keep on doing what you are doing because it is working and do not let anyone try and change you and or your writing because both are superb.