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by amistillill

person momo
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!! FINALLY SOME ACTION!!! WOOHOO!!!!!!!

not saying that the story was boring without the action, because i absolutely LOVE this story...like...to death...BUT! i am UBER happy they\'re getting somewhere...(you can tell because i said \"uber\")
person Tirch
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I can honestly say that this has become my favorite story on this site. Bravo!
person lyla
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
theres gonna be some hands on activities next right? some touching. there needs to be some touching. dont keep us all waiting. thsi story is awesome. i wish i knew someone like finn. hes adorable. vincent too. that guys fricken rocks. gotta lve brits. i do!!! marcus and krissy are gonna hook up right? they should. you should make me a character and have me hook up with vincent. please please please update soon.
person Megan
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, as always. Finn is much too cute for his own good. He\'s got fantastic friends, and I only wish that Vincent would DJ every club that I ever went to. There needs to be more DJs like him out there.
person Carla
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please please make them get together soon!!
person fili
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t wait to see how you write out the next scene-- perferably, the hook up scene.

thank you!
person cukid9
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kept? Haha. Finn really must love Vincent. I think that I was pretty much laughing through this whole chapter. Putting purple Sharpie dots on Sarah\'s face. Hahahaha! A friend of mine did something like that to someone at a party once. Great stuff! I love your sense of humor.
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Write More!!!!!!!!!!!
person Angel
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like the story. It\'s refreshing different and the characters are wonderful too.
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love the tension between them!!! More please!!!

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