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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I felt my breathing get shallow as I read the first part, and then I ended up laughing out loud towards the end. Still my fave story on this site. I\'m very impressed.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nicely done, very very nicely done!
Congrats on the new arrival, it\'s fun playing Aunt, you get all the good stuff all the cuddle & giggles and none of the crappy diapers!
As always, eagerly awaiting an update!
Blue
Congrats on the new arrival, it\'s fun playing Aunt, you get all the good stuff all the cuddle & giggles and none of the crappy diapers!
As always, eagerly awaiting an update!
Blue
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright. I\'ll be honest. This story sucks.
Naaa. Not really! I love it! But I just want you to update. Please?
Naaa. Not really! I love it! But I just want you to update. Please?
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE TELL ME YOU\'RE GOING TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE...LIKE NOW!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hardly ever say this to fanfic writters, but you should really consider having a novel published. It would take many rejections and loads of work, but it is a wonderful experiance for a writter. You have an amazing talent with words, you should go for it! Writing class has amazing characters! even minor characters like Sarah feel like flesh and blood in this absorbing story.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say how much I have been enjoying your story, you are a very very talented writer, your characters are so exceptionally written they are tangible! I love all the references you use, makes such a difference from all the mundane american references normally used. I\'m exceptionally glad to see your reference to music & authors, you have excellent taste.
Congratulations, I eagerly await your updates!
Blue
Congratulations, I eagerly await your updates!
Blue
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw, that\'s such a perfect nite for them! so cute, yet.. not. satisfying, i guess is the better word.
and i loved how you\'re setting up the make-out scene. hot!
thank you!
and i loved how you\'re setting up the make-out scene. hot!
thank you!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHH! how could you!!!!!!!!!! I;m dying of suspense! This was acually the first origanol fic I\'ve read, and I have to say, I love it. Fin is so loveable, and Miranda rocks! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well its about time they kissed! lol. Cant wait for the next chapter!! Your writing\'s awesome :)
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just when I was about to sign off, go to bed, I just happened to look on here again and saw that you updated. Wonderful! This was a good chapter. I love the way Finn affects Miranda. It made me kind of laugh when she kept trying to get the upper hand and kept failing. The line from \'Sand and Foam\' was perfect for the situation I think (probably why you put it in, huh? ^_^)
I have a sneaky suspiscion that there will be nothing \'graphic\' in the next chapter. And, although I am always in favor of explicit scenes (when they\'re well written anyway), I think that the end of this chapter was satisfying enough. It is, after all, a romance -which doesn\'t always equal smut.
So, now I will turn off Saint-Saens and TRY to patiently await your next chapter!
I have a sneaky suspiscion that there will be nothing \'graphic\' in the next chapter. And, although I am always in favor of explicit scenes (when they\'re well written anyway), I think that the end of this chapter was satisfying enough. It is, after all, a romance -which doesn\'t always equal smut.
So, now I will turn off Saint-Saens and TRY to patiently await your next chapter!