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by amistillill

person DollsEyes
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading your story. I liked your writing style and the romance was hot without being graphic. Nicely done.
person Empress
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style was a bit odd for me...at first. But you were on someone's favourites list so I decided to stick it out. I'm so glad that I did. I'm glad that you've managed to get really realistic characters esp Vincent :). I seems really well thought out. Good job!
person Taya
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely fabulous. I loved it...have you read 'Wild Child', by Linda Ashcroft? This piece reminded me so much of that book (which I also loved). So so so so so good. Keep writing.
person Shanna
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story hald me captivate. I just read all 18 chapters without even a bathroom break. I know this is the end of Finn’s and Sarah’s story; but hopefully when you write about the other characters you will mention them, and tell us if Finn ever changed his view on marriage and kids. I would love you Finn, Vincent and Marcus to take their kids out on a play date in some future chapter. Thanks for writing a great story!
person Nabi
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow~
that was so niiice :)
took me a while to finish reading lol
i\'m looking forward to your next work :)
person templeton21
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Amazing story! Seriously, I don\'t know what it is so I sound ridiculously stupid but it was just amazing. And I love you for knowing The Frames. I thought I was one in a thousand who knew about them. I just stumbled upon their music one day in a music store and bought the cd and became obsessed with them, so the fact alone that you had them dance to \'Santa Maria\', this story is now part of my recommended reading. Good job. Seriously.
person Rosemary
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great story! I would love to see a spin-off of Vincent! I really really think its a great idea, and I hope you follow through with it!
person Southern
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok well im gonna be short and sweet. ur story kicks ass. i wish i could write like you. i fell in love with both characters because they were portrayed so realisitcally. you should DEF write a spin off on vince... thanks for this story.. lmao that was quite terse, but i do really think all of that... keep up the good shit! (oh and ur music taste rocks!)
person Anon
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I would really like to see a spin off with Vincent in the main role. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it. It really made my day.
person Christina
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, you are so, talented. that\'s the only word. You put emotion and reality into the story. I really feel in love with your writing, I hope you continue to write more and more because you could places.