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for What the Wind Carries

by flintywoman

person Penelope
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that chapter wasn\'t NEARLY long enough!! Your adoring fans and disciples want MORE!!! More of such a lovely little story! And SO well-written, to boot. Diamond in the dust here, m\'dear.
person Jaxx
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a way to meet a lover. The more I read of this story the more I fall in love with it. Tom is so tragic. I suppose Alex is as well, but he is so filled with life that you can almost overlook it. This is becoming more and more wonderful. Keep it up! Beautiful chapter, I can\'t wait for more.
person Jaxx
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My heart breaks for poor Tom. Alex is so adorable, I just love him. Quick witted little thing, no? I can\'t wait to see how James\' influence is going to come into play. Again, wonderful chapter and I can\'t wait for more!
person L.Y.
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Sarah,
I\'m glad you\'re posting this story here now.
I can\'t believe you didn\'t think it was good.
I love it so far (I\'m up to chapter 14)!
Anyways, that is all. I hope there\'s a sex scene coming up ;)
Hahahha..
Good luck with writing.
person anonymous_fan
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm its interesting to say the least. I look forward to more chapters in the future.....
person Jaxx
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Tom is such a softy. I just love him! I\'m trying quite hard not to go to your site and read the rest of this story. But I have always enjoyed suspense. I think I\'ll be able to wait. But you must update soon! Another beautiful chapter. Lovely, really. Looking foreward to more!
person Scrawl42
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3!
I would be all OMGSBEARMAICHILDREN but I feel that\'s inappropriate given the latest twist of the story.
person Scrawl42
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wtf, mate? Where\'s my review?
Well, the gist of it was only OMGZ <3<3<3, so whatever.
person Jaxx
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I\'m going to like how Alex turns out. And I can\'t wait to see how their relationship develops. Once again, lovely chapter, I look foreward to more.
person Zephyr
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hon, quit worrying! Everything you write is wonderful! I skipped over to the website and read ahead, too. If you\'re that worried about the grammar and sentence structure, though, I\'d be more than happy to beta for you. But it\'s hardly noticeable. Keep up the wonderful work!!!

**Zeph**