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*Drools as angels strike a chord up above* You are so very very good. I loved this chapter. Finally, poor Alex gets what he wants. It was great! I love your writing. Period. Can\'t wait for more, again. Hehehe. Lovely, really.

Okay, I\'m reveiwing your fic because I HAVE TOO!! I can no longer NOT reveiw it!! It is one of the best fics on this site! You have done an outstanding job here. I can\'t wait to read the rest of it and I hope the story NEVER ends. Your characters are lovable (especially James) and I feel like I know them. Alex is a strong and sensitive young man who has a lot more confidence in himself than Tom. Tom I could just smack up side the head to knock some sense into him! LOL James I wish was real because I would love to have him as a friend and a lover! Yes, LOVER!!! He is fun! Sam was adorable and perfect for Tom. You are very talented and I am looking forward to more on this story and I hope to see other stories from you as well.

More More More!! I have to see where this goes from here. This story is amazing. I\'m utterly enraptured with it. This was a great chapter. They just keep getting better and better.

Oh my, this ficcie just keeps getting better and better! As always, I love way you manage to bring the complexities of the characters to light through a more subtle combination of actions and dialogue. Love this fic, look forward to the fantastic daily updates!

Yay! No uncle! We knew he had to be gone, didn\'t we. ^_^ I love your pairings so far -- i really liked the flashbacks with sam. I haven\'t liked alex as much since, but i\'m sure i\'l like him again.

Yay!! I can\'t wait for what\'s next. God, I love this story!! You write so wonderfully. Keep it up!

Eeep! Li I\'m sorry, I\'m tired and hit delete instead of reply to your email! Yes, I\'m actually dyselxic, awfully so. As a teenager I used writing to \'train\' my brain a little bit. If I misspelled a word I wrote that word out correctly over and over again, put it in the story with the right spelling and made myself backtrack to the right spelling each time I had to use it again. This was fun when I was misspelling words like \"girl\" LOL. Anyway, thanks for writing, sorry I messed up and thanks so much for reading!!

Sarah

My God, chapter 11 almost made me cry. Especially at the end. This story keeps getting better and better.

Again, great chapter. I had missed Alex and his quick wit. I had no intention of offending Tom. I know he\'s the big tough guy. He comes across that way very clearly, as a matter of fact. But during some of the times he was with Sam, and especially when Alex does or says something that reminds him of Sam, he gets a little...soft. I think it\'s great! It gives him good depth. You write your characters so very well!

Please inform Tom that I would very much like him to show Alex just how hard he can be...Hehe.

And like I tell you every time...I can\'t wait for more!! (And I\'m very appreciative of how quickly you update. I\'m starting to love Tom, Alex and Sam as much as I love Toshi and Mick. And since I\'m pretty new to AFF I got to read Blurring the Lines all in one sitting and loved that ability. So constant updating is great! Thanks!)

Very Well Done!

I\'m going to be a good girl and start reviewing every time you update so you get lots more reviews than anyone else. You don\'t need that warning chapter up, this doesn\'t seem like an unbeta\'d story and if you\'re dyslexic you sure as hell haven\'t made any mistakes yet. I think i\'ve seen like, one typo in all these chapters, something so minor i don\'t even remember what it was specifically, or where. Synonym switch, something like that. Anyway, yes. This is good. I may even like this BETTER than your first story... haven\'t decided yet. There\'s certainly been more smut which is always nice. And you don\'t SUCK at summaries, your summaries are fine, they just don\'t particularily set your story apart from a lot of the other stuff (mostly bad stuff) on here, and they should because damn your stuff is good.