rate_review Reviews

this is actually a very well written and interesting story. It\'s not at all what i expected and was what i hoped it would be. I feared it would be uncomfortable with people like the pastor in your story.I believe you\'ve shown the difference and instead of something simply dirty and smutty you\'ve created a wonderful piece of work. Your character of Alex is mature and i do i not invision a child which would honestly freak me out. In all honesty, i believe for the time period not even counting the things he has endured he would be more adult and You\'ve done that great justice. And on a less serious note i really like guys in dresses, lol. i blame that on the anime Robotec, The Next Generation and the charactger Lancer. i was like 11 and i was inlove with a cartoon character lol. I\'m also female and tried to dress my barbie like him when i he was on stage, lol. I just wanted to let u know that i am enjoying your story and i look forward to future chapters.

hey, i love this story... the only thing that threw me off is when you changed point of view and started telling Sam\'s story... I know you need to show their love and everything but maybe that part was a little to long or something... please don\'t be offened by this comment... i wanted to share it because its a great story but that part kind of threw me... it was almost as if you started a new story within the story... hey thats a great idea... hint... hint... a story about Tom and Sam... or you can just write some other great story...

Lovely. FINALLY! It\'s a relief knowing that the two are finally together. At least for now...I hope for longer, but I\'ll make no assumptions. Their usually wrong anyway!! Can\'t wait for tomorrow, or, later today, rather. Well Done!

Oh my.

I\'ve just read the first 27 chapters. I\'m hooked. I\'m in awe. I laughed out loud. I shed tears.

I\'ll leave it to those who are qualified to write about the technical aspects of writing. I can only tell you that I enjoyed the story...your characters sucked me in and made me fall in love with them. I know I want to read another 27 chapters. And soon!

Thanks for writing such a wonderful tale...I\'m now heading back to try and find anything (and everything!) else you may have written...because you\'re so damned good!

I didn\'t see that surprise coming at all. You continue to keep me fascinated with your story. Great job. I hope Alex heals fast. :-)

Opps sorry I should have posted that, there is something like 32 or so chapters.... so no, not the end. You\'ll see \"The end\" at the end... unless you want me to stop posting?? =p Hmmm? I can make it the end if you like... LOL

AHHH! That so sweet! *sniffles* i loved it!

Aww, excellent chappy. I adore how you\'ve managed to make take a little fluff and a bunch of angst for an excellent hybrid. You write their relationship so freaking well; the subtle changes across time make for an extremely believable pairing. Smashing, I love this ficcie to pieces.

I\'ll never say I like one of your characters again. At least not before I finish a story. Man, my perceptions are way off lately. Anyway, yes, it was sappy and sickeningly sweet. I liked it anyway. Heh.

oh my GOD, i freaking love this story! i love how it rushes and jumps and slows, and i love the perfect descriptions and imagery, and i LOVE LOVE LOVE Alex, i think he\'s just the most ADORABLE character ever. :sighs: i love you, you\'re my new favorite writer.:)