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for What the Wind Carries

by flintywoman

person s hill
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a great story. I\'ve had the pleasure of reading both of your stories and i\'m amazed anew with each chapter. Your a great writer and I would love to read more if you decide to continue with another story and another couple.
person Flamingolo
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, nice job tying it all together. Excellent ficcie with great multi-dimensional characters that are easy to love. Looking forward to more from you!
person Jayden
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stunning. The most captivating and well written story i\'ve read in years. Would love to see more!
person kuyashinaki
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again! Now you are really something special. I can\'t even remember the last time I reviewed twice on the same story *lol*.
I still love it. Love it even more with ever day/chapter that passes. You are constantly saving my day, \'cause every morning, after I just got to work, the first thing I do isn\'t checking my boring, sometimes even unpolite emails from some colleagues, asses, whatever, I\'m logging into the internet to read your new chapter first, which lifts my mood every day ^__^
I don\'t know if you are interested in it, but if you want to, I\'ll give you a complete and more detailed review on both of your stories (yeah, I read that awesome Toshi/Mick story as well in the meantime, even though your updating speed comes straight from heaven), after this one is completely posted.
It won\'t be about language, spelling etc. like I said before, I\'m not qualified to do that kind of review, but I really would like to give you some impression what I felt and thought during reading both stories. But as it will be a lot of work for me, I won\'t even start before I know you\'d appreciate something like this XD (too lazy, you know).

Okay, and to say something usefull about the most recent chapter: I absolutely loved the scene with Tom\'s father. Both, the father being a total ass and Tom\'s outburst. Just when I thought they\'d never run ot off excuses (Alex\' story abouth why he would never be able to bear a child), Tom just exploded like he probably should have done years before *lol*. The father\'s face must have been just priceless.
person Jaxx
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They look so good together in bed, at least in my mind. Lovely chapter there pal! And next, the meeting with the parents I assume? I can\'t wait for that! Very nicely done!
person Jaxx
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does it sound horrible that I sort of feel bad for Tom\'s dad? With the way things were back then, I can imagine how much more of a shock that would have been for him. And having just lost his wife, and then his son walked out on him? I know he\'s not the greatest man, but I still felt a little sorry for him. Just a little. I loved the chapter! More!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. *blink* Gosh, I don\'t know where to start........okay, no, wait. I do know where to start: *deep breath* THAT WAS SOOOOOO AWESOME!!! I LOVED IT!!! *ahem* Alright, now that I have that out of my system........ ^^ This is an amazing idea, and you\'ve written it so well!!! Ironically, there are actually fewer grammar/spelling mistakes in here than I normally notice in fanfics -- good job!!! ^___^ Not only do I love your originality and creativity, but I have to tell you that your characterization and details absolutely ROCK!!! ^^ Yup, they do. I\'m not kidding. ^___~ I can\'t wait for the next chapter -- I\'m dying to find out what happens next!!! So keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? And again, congrats on a job well done!!! ^___^ Bye!!!
person Jaxx
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like Tom like this! Very nice indeed! I can\'t wait to see how it will go with his parents. I wonder I wonder. Have to wait until tomorrow I suppose. Very Nice!
person Jaxx
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay Tom! I was with him all the way in this chapter. Although, I\'m glad Alex stopped him. Very entertaining! Can\'t wait for more!
person Rae
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of God. I\'ve never read a fic that was so well written, so very well described from beginning to end. I praise thee, and will check back daily for updates. You certainly know how to captivate your reader; my heart ached during the very sad scenes, and during the erotic scenes, well.. you know how it goes. Thank you for writing this fic!

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