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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s sooo good!!! ur sooo great! and ur updating the chaps sooo quick! and that makes me very happy!!! *bows* thank you for writing this!!!!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah! You\'re a quick updater--which suits my puroposes just fine. I already like the characters and I just know I\'m going to become disgustingly attachted. Tom\'s my favorite--I have a soft spot for misanthropes-with-tragic-pasts-who-have-soft-spots-for-beautiful-boys-with-tragic-pasts. Keep writing!!
non sequitur:
Alex\'s B-day\'s on the Ides of March [the 15th] That\'s my b-day too! \"Beware the Ides of March\" so the soothesayers says.
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Alex\'s B-day\'s on the Ides of March [the 15th] That\'s my b-day too! \"Beware the Ides of March\" so the soothesayers says.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just had to review this now. Fantastic story! I\'m really enjoying this. One of the best and most original ones I\'ve come across in a long time. The descriptions are superb. Your dyslexia is not even noticeable - and I\'ve seen BAD dyslexia. Despite not having a beta I\'ve only seen a few mistakes here and there. I\'m looking forward to the rest of this story. Good job!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a story. You\'ve got me hooked. When I read your opening remarks, I was sure I wasn\'t going to be able to overlook the errors -- sure I\'d quit and move on after a couple of paragraphs. But by a few paragraphs in, I was riveted. I could picture the setting, taste the dust, smell the unwashed characters and hear the hoof beats. Please keep it coming. I gotta know what happens to these two. If it would make you feel more secure, I\'d be glad to beta for you -- anything, just don\'t leave me hanging here, please!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this rules ^^ its very interesting fucking well written. You have me hooked! please, please please update this! and really soon.!!!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve never read an American Old West story, before so I don\'t really have anything to base it off of but this is really good. I found it very realistic and the characters are very well played out. One of the better slash stories I\'ve read in awhile. I can\'t wait to read more.
-ShadeOfSolace
-ShadeOfSolace
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my goodness gracious, i am already in love with this story. i really enjoy how you set up the story and cant wait to see how it unfolds.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe....I can\'t wait for more. Please post again soon. I\'m absolutely loving this.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I really do! It\'s getting better and better! Can\'t wait to read more. Definently one of my favorities slash fics out there.
-ShadeOfSolace
-ShadeOfSolace
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again everyone, thanks for reading this story!
About that warning. See, I\'m very conscious of two things, not being able to spell and not knowing the first thing about sentence structure or proper grammer. The spelling I\'ve gotten better at and the spell check helps loads but still I\'ll use the wrong word or reverse words and that takes a few edits to remove. The sentence structure, well, I do my best and I\'m always trying to learn. Since I know those are two huge pet peeves for alot of people, I wanted to offer fair warning. This is a first draft, so the flow isn\'t here yet and some of the story is changing as I go. I normally don\'t show anyone a story this rough but this one required it. It\'s killing me to write it! Blur was literally written in about five weeks, I\'m on month two with Wind. I\'ve 80,000 words done now though so break out the mudslides! THat puts me at the two thirds of the way done mark. Whooo hoo! It looks like it will finish in this lifetime.
Anyway, what I\'m saying is, this story isn\'t as smooth as I\'d like it to be but I need the feedback to face writing it everyday. Hence the fair warning... sorry if it offended some of you. That wasn\'t the intent. And yes, I\'m sure I\'m dyselxic LOL I couldn\'t spell my own middle name until I was 12.
I\'m kind of tickled that so many of you have skipped to the website and read ahead. Sillies! It made me grin though so there is that.
Oh and I saw on the posts that some of you were surprised at the setting. I\'ve never read a Western and never written one. I\'ve been doing some historical research and such, did you all know that there was a great deal of homosexual sex going on during the Civil War? It was acutally very common and they even had dances were the \'girl-boys\' would wear dresses and play the part of women.... hmmmm happy thoughts....
Thanks again! Truely, if it weren\'t for these reviews and the wonderful emails I\'ve gotten I would have shelved this story and gone on to something easier. Getting a thousand words out is like bloodletting, only more painful. It helps to know it\'s not the utter crap I\'d feared it was. whew... speaking of which I need to go try to finish the next scene.
Sarah =)
About that warning. See, I\'m very conscious of two things, not being able to spell and not knowing the first thing about sentence structure or proper grammer. The spelling I\'ve gotten better at and the spell check helps loads but still I\'ll use the wrong word or reverse words and that takes a few edits to remove. The sentence structure, well, I do my best and I\'m always trying to learn. Since I know those are two huge pet peeves for alot of people, I wanted to offer fair warning. This is a first draft, so the flow isn\'t here yet and some of the story is changing as I go. I normally don\'t show anyone a story this rough but this one required it. It\'s killing me to write it! Blur was literally written in about five weeks, I\'m on month two with Wind. I\'ve 80,000 words done now though so break out the mudslides! THat puts me at the two thirds of the way done mark. Whooo hoo! It looks like it will finish in this lifetime.
Anyway, what I\'m saying is, this story isn\'t as smooth as I\'d like it to be but I need the feedback to face writing it everyday. Hence the fair warning... sorry if it offended some of you. That wasn\'t the intent. And yes, I\'m sure I\'m dyselxic LOL I couldn\'t spell my own middle name until I was 12.
I\'m kind of tickled that so many of you have skipped to the website and read ahead. Sillies! It made me grin though so there is that.
Oh and I saw on the posts that some of you were surprised at the setting. I\'ve never read a Western and never written one. I\'ve been doing some historical research and such, did you all know that there was a great deal of homosexual sex going on during the Civil War? It was acutally very common and they even had dances were the \'girl-boys\' would wear dresses and play the part of women.... hmmmm happy thoughts....
Thanks again! Truely, if it weren\'t for these reviews and the wonderful emails I\'ve gotten I would have shelved this story and gone on to something easier. Getting a thousand words out is like bloodletting, only more painful. It helps to know it\'s not the utter crap I\'d feared it was. whew... speaking of which I need to go try to finish the next scene.
Sarah =)